Tuesday, February 17, 2009

The Bloody Soldier

As the final bullet left the chamber of the automatic rifle called the The Lancer, he saw only 7 enemies. He looked up to the heavens and the called out his older brothers name. "Kai" was his name and after the scream he charged at the enemies with the cinaving look upon his face. He lashed out at the enemies with his chainsaw bayonet reving. He slowly ripped through one then another. The chainsaw started to lose its effect so he dropped his gun and switch to his shotgun with the idea of blasting through his friends.

3 comments:

  1. -This is really awesome Dom...keep up the good work!!

    -Mikea Cooper

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  2. I love the first sentence! I think you mean "conniving." (Remember to check spelling before posting.) Also, each entry should be about 250 words. And where are all the other entries? You need to get busy.

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  3. Dminque you should try to be alittle more descripitve and make it longer.

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